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Hi Dkosoy, really good read! I heard AMEX first a couple of days ago (?) and the medical read sounds much warmer and fuller, with more tone variation, so I would say you have really met your goals on that one. Your voice is really well-suited for medical narration! It was interesting to hear and made me want to learn more about a topic I know nothing about. Very good!
Mary
Hi Mitch, really good job! I liked your energy and enthusiasm for the La Quinta brand. It was humorous and I could hear the smile in your voice. I especially liked “Bravo, tall meeting man!” which made me chuckle, and I could visualize what the TV ad would look like with the one guy sitting taller than everyone else in the room and probably only him noticing it. I like it!
Mary
Hi Steve, really nice! Your voice is very welcoming and reassuring to the listener. You did a good job of painting a picture of the house, and I could imagine this script with the images of the house shown on TV in the background. Very good genre for you! It sounded conversational and approachable.
Mary
Hi Chas, good job! I like your energy on this one and the excitement about pizza in general, very good! I like how you varied up the many statements that ended with exclamation points. Very nice!
Mary
Hi Steve, good read! I preferred the first read, which sounded a little more friendly and pleasantly convincing without needing to be “tough” in the delivery. Good pace and clarity throughout. Very good!
Mary
Hi Docr15, good read! Your laid back tone and vibe of voice is good for this genre. I think you had the start of an accent at the beginning of the read and you could lean in to the Cajun accent throughout the script a little more for more believability. I heard “come on” instead of “come along”, until the third time, so I would say that word just sounded smushed / shortened a bit. You could try experimenting with stretching out “along” which would go with the accent too. Good work!
Mary
Hi Docr15, good work! I like this read for you, sounds warm and relaxed with good pacing throughout. I think too that emphasizing “Happy Thanksgrilling” could make the script have a little more humor in it at the end, like you are inventing a new holiday by grilling in the summer or something and you are cracking yourself up about taking about it, just a small suggestion. Very good read!
Mary
Hi Docr15, really nice work! It sounds nice and casual and trustworthy, which is great for this script. I don’t have much to critique here. Very good!
Mary
Hi all! Here are 2 takes on the same recording. Do you like one better than the other? One has a lead-in (which seems to help me) and one does not. Let me know what you think. Thank you!!
Mary
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Hi Kevin! I liked your voice for this read and genre. I think the pace could have been a little faster and the tone on the lists throughout (such as “..blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows) a little more varied in tone from each other if that makes sense. Your voice is nice and calm and clear. Good job!
Mary
