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Hi Bil-Bo, very good! I too like the music behind it, it’s very well-produced. Your voice is so nice and conversational on this, really sounded effortless and great for the script. Very good job!
Mary
Hi Daniel, welcome to the forum!
This was great – you have such a super low voice that is very unique! I liked this read, but you might try for a little more variation in tone as you hit certain words and phrases. Your natural tendency is possibly more monotone(?) This is really good, I want to hear more!
Mary
Hello all! Here is a recording (on my phone) for any and all feedback. Working with lead-ins to help get in the mood and make it sound more believable and conversational, less like I’m reading. Let me know if it hits the mark. Thank you!
Mary
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Thanks for the feedback KBridges! Yes, I’ve been trying to be consistent and the practice is hopefully helping 🙂
Thanks for the tips, that is a great idea about visualizing walking through the forests to lighten it up a bit, good idea. Thanks!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback SuperLuke! Yes, the high pitched ringing you hear will soon be a thing of the past once my new equipment gets here, I promise! It bugs me too and hopefully you and others will notice a difference then. I think this was in the Edge library under commercial, but it feel somewhat like narration too, but yes it could use more smile in the delivery. There were some tongue-twisters which I was probably over-focused on getting right. Thank you!!
Mary
Hi Alexis, I love your voice for this script! So nice, warm, smooth and welcoming. The only thing I would offer is that maybe a little more variation in tone could be to the list of each of the 4 items at the end of the script. Really good work!
Mary
Hi Svenbot, great read! I like the emphasis on so many words. There are so many periods in this one, and I like your take on the read, very good! I’m sure your demo went great!
Mary
Hi Toque, this is great! So believable and sincere. I especially like the emphasis on “see” the damage; it really stops you in your tracks and as the listener we (hopefully) feel instant empathy. This is very well done!
Mary
Hi Solin232, really solid work here! It sounds really well-paced and with great choices on phrases and selected key words to emphasize. Your voice is really nice and very well-suited for this genre. Great job!
Mary
