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Hi Tim, good read! This sounded authentic and conversational. I liked the pace and the emphasis on the selected words throughout – very nice!
Mary
Hi Tim! It does sound warm, and this was nice. Some of the pauses are making it sound a little bit choppy to me vs. describing how smooth and clean the beer tastes by leaning in to the words, I hope that makes sense? Good read!
Mary
Hi Katelyn! I listened to both versions and I like the second one better as well. You had a warm and friendly informative tone throughout, and a good smile in your voice with a good pace. I think the second one had more emphasis in certain areas like “that all changed..” which made the read more interesting and also helps the listener get the key points. Very good!
Mary
Hello all! Here is a recording for any and all feedback. Let me know what you think!
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Thanks for the feedback Tim! I did not mean to sound critical, but more excited about the Xterra, so I will watch my delivery on that. I agree that my lists were not as varied as they could have been, so that’s another area I will work on. Thanks for the tips, that’s helpful.
Mary
Hi Chas, thanks for the feedback! Yes, I will work on my enunciation on “if” so it doesn’t sound so soft, good catch. Also good tip on the “intention” syllable emphasis. I have to watch uptalk, one time I feel like I eliminate it, and then the next time it pops back up. You are right, I was running out of breath on “handy”. More excitement / energy on Xterra would be good as well. Thanks for the specific notes, this is very helpful!
Mary
Hi Svenbot, thanks for the feedback! That is really weird, I did not catch that I totally smushed the first “of” I will watch the tone variation as well. I was focused on not adding unnecessary pauses where there are no commas, which has been hard, but seems like it should simple. I like the idea of telling a story with a beginning, middle and an end, that really makes sense in making it seem believable, I will work on that too. Thanks for the tips!
Mary
Hi Katelyn, great job! It sounded quick, but fitting for the topic, and very clear and friendly too. Very good!
Mary
