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Hi Jon, great job! You have a really nice range of tones and characters / feels in your reads! I too am getting ready to record my first demo and it’s so nice to hear the finished product. Really good!
Mary
Hi Chas, good work! I think that #2 was a bit more descriptive / believable in painting the word pictures, very good job!
Mary
Hi Alexis, very nice! I like the variation in tone and the nice smile in your voice – very good!
Mary
Hi Katelyn, good job! It sounded very clear and straightforward and with good pacing and energy, and also conversational. Good job!
Mary
Hi Tim, thanks for the feedback! I will work on the unintentional pauses, I see what you mean. Thank you!
Mary
Hi Tom! Good reads! I like the warmth in your voice and the pacing and enunciation for both scripts. I liked the smile in your voice for Purina and the slightly folksy accent and decisiveness for the 4H script. Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Ed! Good read. Good pacing and enunciation throughout. The tone of the read is serious (my interpretation), but you might try varying up the tone a little more throughout to give a little more encouragement / positivity to encourage shoppers to hang in there and continue coming to Home Depot. Good job on this!
Mary
Hi FCabral – very good! Your voice is very well-suited for this genre. I liked the tone variation, pace and clear enunciation throughout. It sounds very natural. Very good!
Mary
Hi Chas, great work! This is a good genre for you. I too think you could slow down the Club Med script and really hang on the 6 phrases that start with “No”. After that long list of things, I think too that you could pause just a tiny bit before “Now imagine a Club Med…” to give it more emphasis, because you are now solving the needs of the reader by convincing people how they can escape all of these (negative) things by taking a trip to Club Med. Very good tone and enunciation for both!
Mary
