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Hi Eelalannee! Thanks for the feedback. Yes, my opening should have hit the ground “running” (no pun intended) a bit more, thank you! I will work on that Thanks again!
Mary
Hi Bil-Bo! All 3 reads were very well done and produced, and sound like they are already out there! I liked the pacing and energy and casualness for all three, and the character voices were great too! It seemed like there should have been a micro pause after “…rub down.” and before “Great”, but that’s being nit-picky. Great job!
Mary
Hi Thomas, very good! I liked both reads. Your voice is soothing and pleasant to listen to. The second read caught my attention a little more, I think because it seemed to have a little more variation and enthusiasm in tone throughout the script. Great work!
Mary
Hi Eric! I really like your very deep tone, very nice! I agree that there is an echo in the background that makes it hard to understand all of the words. You have a good story-tellling voice and I want to hear more! Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Erik, very good! Your voice is nice and clear and believable for this commercial. I would think that “just” should be emphasized a little more to show the contrast between using fresh oranges vs. concentrate in the first sentence. Good job!
Mary
Hi Erik, good read! This sounded good and authoritative with a lot of decisive statements, perfect for selling a car. Good genre for you. Good job!
Mary
Hi Erik. Very nice! Good energy, nice warm tone and enunciation. I’m not fully set up with a home studio yet, but the sound was good on my end.
Mary
Hi Katelyn, good job! Nice pacing throughout and variation in tone, very good! I did not get a spontaneous vibe from it, but I liked it!
Mary
Hi all! Here is a recording for any and all feedback. Let me know what you think. Thank you!
Mary
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