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Hi Katelyn, good read! It sounded nice and straightforward and conversational as well as educational. Good pacing and enthusiasm throughout. Very good!
Mary
Hi Kathy, good read! It sounded nice and conversational, and you had a nice smile in your voice. Good pace and enunciation, did not hear mouth clicks on my end. Good job!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback Beckolin! You are welcome for the feedback on your poem, it was really well done!
Good to hear that it sounded casual and conversational. I feel like this would be the approach I would take to get a friend more interested in trying to read music, by intentionally varying my tone to keep it casual and not formal. I have been told that I have a tendency to “up-talk” which is raising the tone like a question at the end of a sentence, so I need to continue to work on that. I see how I sped up “little black dots” to be too fast; should have slowed down a bit there to match the rest of the pace, good catch. Very helpful, thanks for the comments!
Mary
Hello all! Here is a recording for any and all feedback. Thank you! Working on lead-ins, and sounding natural and enthusiastic. Thanks!
(P.S. Uploaded an older recording first by mistake, feel free to comment on that one too, but the Glock commercial is the second recording).Mary
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Mary
Hi Chas – really nice! I like the deep rasp and range in your voice, it is perfect for a whiskey commercial. Nice variation in tone throughout for both scripts and really nice pacing and enunciation too. Good smile in your voice. Good job!
Mary
Hi MrGenadry! Welcome to the forum! This is a good genre for you. You have a nice warm voice and good enunciation. I liked the pauses throughout too, helps the listener consider what is being said. I agree with Toque in that the word “love” because it repeated so many times might be good to vary up in tone now and then. Overall really good. keep up the good work!
Mary
Hi Toque, nice work! I liked this one a lot. Great enthusiasm, enunciation and tone variation throughout. Good smile in your voice and emphasis on Progressive. Good job!
Mary
Hi Thomas! Good reads! The pacing and flow of both scripts was good. Your voice is nice and authoritative.
Cafe Vienna seemed a little somber to me – the script seems like it has more of a daydream vibe vs. a serious vibe. I would think the tone should be a little softer / reflective maybe?
For Lender’s bagels I liked it better, but I think you could go even bigger, with more enthusiasm and variation in pitch throughout the script, it sounded a little monotone to me (I have to push myself in this area as well). Keep it up!
Mary
