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Hey Rogue1 – that was great! I loved it and it was spot on for Spicoli. I too think you could emphasize / stretch out “REALLY” a little bit more. The laugh at the end was great. Good job!
Mary
Hi Beckolin – wow, very nice pleasant read! Excellent pacing and I agree great variety in the character voices! Nice rhyming patterns throughout – I found myself looking forward to the next “James James Morrison Morrison…” Very well done! You have a really nice and warm story-telling voice. Very good!
Mary
Hi Monibr16! Good job on this one. Your voice sounded nice and light with good energy and appropriate for an on-hold voice. The word “while” was missed, not a big deal for practice but just something to watch for in future reads. Keep it up!
Mary
Good evening all! Here is a recording (done on my phone) for any and all feedback. Working on lead-ins to help create a more conversational approach. Let me know what you think. Thanks!
Mary
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Hi John, thanks for the feedback! I’m working on sounding authentic for the script and conversational, and keeping things flowing but not too slow or too fast, so thanks again for your comments!
Mary
Hi Burdagirl, very good! The variation in tone and the pacing were great. It sounded very natural and authentic for this script. I liked the emphasis on Private Payments as it appears to me like it’s the highlighted product / point of the commercial. Very good job!
Mary
Hi Rogue1, thanks for your feedback! Yes, I am definitely working on making the performance sound more conversational, will continue to work on that. Thanks again!
Mary
Hi Burdahgirl, thank you for your feedback! I’m glad you can tell a difference!! Progress – YEAH! 🙂
Mary
Thanks for the feedback SuperLuke! Yes, I’m starting to work on the setup in my studio, I never noticed the buzzing / humming of the fan on my computer until I started voiceover! I will continue to work on the smile in my voice and pushing the performance more, just trying to not cross the line of ridiculousness! Sounds like I have a ways to go 🙂 Thank you!
Mary
Hello all! Here is a recording (done on my phone) for any and all feedback. Let me know what you think. Thank you!!
Mary
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