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Hi Katelyn, good job! I liked the pacing and variation in tone for this one – very clear enunciation as well. Good job!
Mary
Hi Robert, thanks for the feedback! I will work on more energy and tone changes.
Actually Cold Snap has more of a crisper than a fruity taste; even with the spices. I like fruity / sours too, but this one is different. Some day you will have to try a taste! Flights are the best, I agree I would not want to waste a full pour on something bad (like most IPAs for me). Dos Equis are drinkable, as are margaritas!! Cheers!
Mary
Hi Kathy, thanks for the feedback! I will work on varying up the list of items a little more. There are soo many of them 🙂 I will look for a Rolling Rock and and see what I can find. Thanks! mk
Hi Touzet, really nice! You have a calm, reassuring and interesting voice that is perfectly suited to this genre! I too am struggling to find anything to critique – very good job!
Mary
Hi FCabral, very nice reads! You have really good clarity and enunciation and a nice warm voice which makes it nice and relaxing to listen to and learn from. I listened to all 3 twice each, and I could not tell a huge difference between them. I guess I will say the third version is my favorite, because it has just a little more variation in tone, especially for the opening line, which would help to draw in the listener. Really good job!
Mary
Hi Svenbot, I like this and welcome back! Great conversational tone and you had a nice smile in your voice. Very good!
Mary
Hi Amitofu, good reads! I liked how you varied up both sets of reads with tone and pacing.
Script 1 take 1: This was interesting and had some good dramatic pauses, which went with the low tone.
Script 1 take 2: I preferred this one, the tone was a little smoother and it seemed to flow better. It was more encouraging to the listener.
Script 2 take 1: Good read. There were a couple of missed words (I realize this is practice, but it’s just something I noticed).
Script 2 take 2: I preferred this one, again the tone was a little more uplifting, the pacing smoother and there was more variation throughout. There were some different missed words in this read. Overall very good for all!Mary
Hi Amitofu! I will work on my energy on this one. I like the emphasis on “…YOUR day”, I will try that. I will work on overdoing it too; it sounds like much more in my head when I’m saying it but like you say, it is easier to dial it back than ramp it up. Good tips. Thank you!
Mary
Hi everyone! Here is a recording for any and all feedback on one of my favorite topics, beer! Let me know what you think. Authentic? Conversational? Thanks!
Mary
Sam Adams – Cold Snap
We all know it’s the coldest time of the year, but we’re ready to fight back with the bold flavors of Cold Snap. This Sam Adams seasonal is only available from January through March, so you’d better start stocking up. This lively unfiltered White Ale gets a kick from a bright blend of spring spices. Orange and lemon zest, vanilla, rose hips, hibiscus, plum and grains of paradise add subtle sweetness, while coriander contributes a peppery bite, creating that refreshing crisp flavor that signals spring is on its way. Sam Adams Cold Snap – embrace the cold!
