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Hi Brian, thanks for the feedback! I will work on connecting with the script a little more. I was picturing a colleague, an older student who is going back to finish their degree that I see potential in to be more and that I want to encourage, but it is hard for me to make it sound that way to others. Thank you!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback Monibr16! I’ll work on getting the smile feel on this moment, which I agree is meant to seem exciting. Appreciate it!
Mary
Hi SacScotty, thanks for the feedback! I will work on making moment stand out a little more, and also the letters WGU. Thank you!
Mary
Hi Robert, very good recording and production! I really like John Deere for you, it sounds very authentic and natural. Good pace and decisive tone. Very good!
Mary
Hi Robert, good job! I agree with what Brian is saying – maybe vary the tone on “now if he could only operate the microwave” to give a little more contrast to how simple this new thing is making his life, if that makes sense. Overall very good, and it seems like a good genre for you.
Mary
Hi Touzet, really nice read and musical production! Your voice is very deep, warm and unhurried, which feels very appropriate for this genre. Very good!
Mary
Hi Brian, good reads for all! I think the pacing was good for all, and I did not notice any conjunctions being hit hard at all. I was also trying to imagine who your audience was for all 3. I struggle with having a specific listener myself. Also, since you naturally speak quickly, have you tried a car commercial? Those seem to put a lot of information in a short time slot – as long as you can speak very clearly (like I am hearing here) I think it would be a good fit for you too.
Script 1: I liked the tone of this, like you were telling a friend about why they should use the product. Very authentic feel.
Script 2: I think this one was the one that outside your comfort zone (right?), but you did well varying your tone to be much softer to reflect the product. My guess is your were telling your wife / girlfriend about the product?
Script 3: I like this one the best for you of these 3 – it is spoken with a quick pace but is very clear and appropriate for Spotify. The last time Spotify is mentioned I think could be emphasized a little more, it gets really quiet on that word. This one feels targeted to a friend or nephew / younger relative, again, very authentic feel. I hope that helps – good job!
Mary
Hi FCabral – very nice read. Your voice is deep and calm, and very clear for this genre. The pacing seemed very appropriate to allow the listener to listen and understand. Good job!
Mary
Hello all and Happy New Year! Here is a recording (recorded on my phone) for any and all feedback. Let me know what you think. Thanks!
Mary
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