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Hi Robert, thanks for the feedback! Thanks for the suggestion, that totally makes sense in making the variation of products being sold stand out a little more. Appreciate it!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback Kathy! Yes I hear the “tah” you are talking about – gah. Even after focusing on it, still manages to creep in. Thanks again!
Mary
Hi Robert, sounds great! I like John Deere for you, flowed well and sounded very natural. Good music in the background too. Good job on that and Happy New Year!
Mary
Hi Kathy – that was really fun! I could tell you were having a good time as you were going through the steps – very casual and entertaining! I found myself not really focusing on each word as it was written (as I tend to do), but more enjoying listening, and I think that’s a very good thing we should all strive for. I like the podcast vibe for you! Very good fit. I like the idea of explaining how to do things myself, maybe I’ll give it a try too. Explaining how to do something probably triggers something different in your brain than performing or selling or acting, just my thoughts on that. Very good job!
Mary
Hello all! Here is a recording for any and all feedback (recorded on my phone). I’m working on sounding conversational and making sure I pronounce all the “for”s and “to”s vs. “fer” and “teh”s. Let me know what you think about it, it’s a hard habit to correct for me! 🙂
Mary
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Mary
Hi Kathy! Good read! I think the pacing and clarity were good, but the tone on “…from our carefully selected springs” sounded a little flat to me, maybe “carefully” could have been emphasized a little more to vary the pitch a little? I was thinking about what has not changed since 1845 for this company and it’s possibly the fact that they CAREFULLY select the springs, vs. use just any water, so that makes it more important to emphasize in my mind.
I did not mind the “a hundred” vs. “one hundred” on this one; it sounded appropriate for the script. Overall very good!
Mary
Ah, ok, I see. I was thinking that might have been what you meant. In the movie Miranda had a dismissive tone towards Andy, quieter / softer in delivery but still piercing in the message due to Miranda’s personality.
I was trying for impatience and irritation when I read it, so I was trying to make it sound more emotional. I’m glad an emotion came through on that. Thanks for clarifying! 🙂 mk
