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Hi Lexi! Welcome to the forum! I like your voice – very smooth, warm and friendly, and I like how you varied up the 2 scripts for a nice contrast between both. Good clarity and pacing for both scripts. Good enthusiasm on the Honey Bunches of Oats. Keep it up!
Mary
Hello feedback friends! Here is a recording (on my phone) for any and all feedback. Let me know what you think. Thank you!
Mary
4/H
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Mary
Hi Dan, great work! These are all great scripts for you. Your voice is very warm and comforting and your pacing and enunciation are on point.
Script 1: At about 27 seconds you substituted a “the” instead of a “this” – “By the time this book…” Minor thing. Otherwise really pleasant read.Script 2: There is a longer than typical pause after “…caused a pretty epic flood.” and the next sentence. I would think any longer than needed pauses could be edited out as needed. Also, there was no pause at the comma after “the vat,…” Good read!
Script 3: Great variation in tone to soothe and relax the listener for a meditative listen – very good!
Mary
Hi Dante! Good work. You have a very nice smooth and clear voice that is well-suited for all 3 of these scripts.
Script 1: This may be a regional thing, but I have only heard “Aetna” pronounced as “eht-na”, like the e in everywhere or Ezra (kindof). I have not heard your pronunciation , which sounded more to me like “eight-na”, as in number 8. Good pacing and tone.
Script 2: Data plex – very good! You sounded very familiar with this script and so it flowed very nicely.
Script 3: Great adjustment to reflect the serious tone for the topic. Very natural and conversational.
I think I like 2, 3, then 1, but really all are good! Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Katelyn! Good work! I love the clarity in your voice and the pacing throughout. You sounded authentically interested in the topic and eager to tell others about it. Very good!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback Dan! I’ve been trying to vary up the tone and emphasis on words to make it interesting, I will continue to work on that. Thank you!
Mary
Hello everyone! Here is a recording for your review, done in my closet on phone. Any and all feedback would be great! I was going for a conversational but calm tone here. I’ve heard VRBO pronounced as “verbo” but I decided to spell it out “V R B O”. I think it could go either way. Thank you!
Mary
VRBO
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