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Good evening all! Here is my recording (recorded on my phone) for any and all feedback. Working on sounding authentic yet natural. Thank you!
Mary
Sears Carpets
OH! Welcome to my commercial. I just want to tell you about what a great experience I had buying new carpet from Sears. Well, I went to Sears and found that DuPont no-stain carpets were on sale through Saturday. They also offered free installation guaranteed. If you want one of America’s premiere carpet brands, just go to Sears. It’s DuPont Stainless in hundreds of colors and textures, on sale through Saturday, at Sears.Hi Damian! Great read and genre for your voice. Your voice is very clear, warm and friendly, all things we want in an insurance agent. Very good!
Mary
Hi VoiceofKarale! Nice read here, your voice sounds really good for this genre. “Because character” raised in pitch at the end like “Because character?”, minor point. Overall good tempo and pace! Mary
Hi Voiceofkarale! Good read. Your voice is very clear and flows well. For “Great style, great value and everything ships free” you might try various inflections to help emphasize those 3 points a little differently from each other to help them stand out. Good work!
Mary
Hi Voiceofkarale! I liked this read! You had great energy and a nice smile in your voice. You voice is well-suited for this genre!
Mary
Hi Beckolin! Great read! Your voice is nice and warm, and has great clarity. It sounded very well paced too, and would really keep someone’s attention for a narration like this one. I can’t think of much to critique here, very well done!
Mary
Hi Fleishman, great job on all 4 reads! You have a really nice clear voice with great inflections and flow throughout. My order for you is 3 Tacos, 4 Telephony, 1 Tour, 2 Barrier Reef. I like how you were able to vary up the read feeling and emotion dependent on the topic as well, really good. I think the Tacos read appealed the most to me because I could tell you were having fun and it sounded a tiny bit more natural than the rest, but really all 4 were very good. Great job!
Mary
Hi Evette – welcome! I really like your voice – it is very soft and sweet and well suited for these types of commercials.
Script 1: This one felt just a tad rushed to me. You might try envisioning yourself in France and experiencing being there, and possibly adding some varied inflections to the last sentence, which includes a list of items.
Script 2: Good read!
Script 3: Another good read. You might try emphasizing “Oil of Olay” in the last sentence more, the tone drops and it’s the only time the product name is mentioned. Keep it up!Mary
Hi Kathy – I really liked this read! You had great energy and pacing throughout, and it flowed really well. not too slow or too fast and I could hear the smile in your voice. Very good!
Mary
