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[Earthbul]

Any feedback is appreciated.

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[Earthbul]

Any thoughts or feedback will be greatly appreciated.

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[Provocaleric]

Dear Airbear,
It sounds very good! Your voice is upbeat, friendly and clear with a nice little tone! The only thing I would say would be to add a little more musicality to your reads, but it sounds very good. Take care and good luck

• This reply was modified 3 years, 5 months ago by Provocaleric.

[Provocaleric]

Dear Isynge,

I applaud you putting yourself up for review, that can a big step. I want to start by saying your voice is clear and your pronunciations are great! If I had to critique your reads I would say you need to connect more with what your reading and do less reading if you know what I mean and add a little more musicality to your phrasing plus know where to hit your key words, we have to sell this stuff. Great job overall and I wish you the best!

[Provocaleric]

Dear Forum,

I look forward to your feedback, thank you!

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[Blandus]

Hello Friends!

This is my first attempt at recording VO scripts. I am recording a couple of scripts from the edge studio library as homework before my next coaching session. Any feedback you may have would be most appreciated! Thanks a bunch!

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[Earthbul]

Truck spots are not your friend. Don’t misunderstand, I like your voice but I think you should focus on calmer/humorous reads. I feel your voice lends itself towards it. Btw I couldn’t access the other file for some reason.

[ksheneman]

Kathryn Sheneman’s first submission for feedback. Have at it. Thank you. (Pumas2pbs.mp3)

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[RoxyMel]

I enjoy your pronunciation. Just seems to me if you give slightly shorter pauses on comas and slightly longer for ends of sentences it might be even easier for the listener to follow along. I love this interesting topic your speaking about.

[Provocaleric]

I thought your read was very professional and sounded good, but my rookie ears think you should pick up the tempo some just to give it a little more umph! Nice job..:)

[Earthbul]

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All comments appreciated

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[Earthbul]

Same as previous admission but with an added soundbed.

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