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[Artist7]

Thanks for the positive, helpful feedback, latyesemca! Will try to incorporate the good tips during the next read!

[Dominic]

Hello everyone! Third round of reads, any feedback is welcome!

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[solin232]

Hi, I enjoyed both of your reads ! didn’t notice anything negative that stands out to me. I thought your pacing was good and you kept me engaged through both reads, great job!

[Hazaro]

These are great Dominick, you have a natural storytelling vibe. Pacing, enunciation and tone are all there. I felt that Earth Doc could have been a touch more more intimate as it seemed like you were shouting a bit, but overall these were great!

[Tates-VO]

Hi Dominic your tone was good and pace was just right and it sounds like your ready to offer a deal to buy so nice job

[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, I have another practice attempt in preparation for my upcoming narration demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you!

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[Hazaro]

Good pacing and enunciation!

[TimberTykes]

Good Evening, everyone!

I have here another recording, for practice! Feedback or criticism of any kind is much appreciated, as usual.

Since my previous entry, nothing has changed. I’m looking for opinions on glottal stops, involving words that end with ‘st,’ ‘ps,’ ‘xt,’ as well as words with the usual ‘t’ in them. You know the ones, lol. Also, I tried my best to keep the reading at a moderate pace, so please let me know how I did there!

Personally, I feel that I could’ve varied the word ‘babbling’ a bit more, but hey.

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[Hazaro]

No glottal stops stood out to me, thought it sounded great. The last ‘poke” in “Pokemon” got slightly lost, but easy fix. Read was great IMO!

[raven808]

All the “t”s sounded great to me! I’m not sure if it was intentional or part of the scripts but some “pauses” seemed a little long in between words (i.e. after “talking” and before “blue”) but if that was intentional, nevermind! And your voice compliments the script well!

[sfeldman]

I have my first-ever narration recording next week and I’m a bit nervous hahaha – I’d love feedback on these!! (In coaching, we’re working on my modulation/emphasis, pace, and not being too choppy.)

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[Hazaro]

Nice energy in Mattel and nice pacing in Fibromyalgia. Your voice is great for the college narration – the pacing sped up a bit after a little flub and got rushed though. Don’t worry about that as you can go back and record over it no one will know! 😉

[raven808]

The college one suits your voice really well! It felt informative and engaging.

[Hazaro]

Would love feedback on any of these. Working on getting even more specific with my commercial reads. Thanks so much!

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[MayeWest]

Good reads!!! I like your Motel 6 and Revlon!!

[Tates-VO]

Hi I like your crayola I think it needs a little more excitement but otherwise it sounds so clear

[Hazaro]

A few more for feedback. Anything helps and I’m grateful for it. From the same assignment working on being even more specific in my commercial reads. Thank you in advance!

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[Silver Wit]

I’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath

[Hazaro]

Thank you for that. I try to gauge how long the spot might be, but realize I might be editing a bit too tightly!

[cbehrens]

Great reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.

[Hazaro]

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[raven808]

Hi, this is my first time on here so please ignore the lack of editing (i.e. background noise). Thank you for the feedback!

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[Hazaro]

Hi Raven. Your clarity, tone and inflection are all there, great job on that. It does sound a bit forced however, I think if you can connect to the material and personalize it more, it would really elevate it to sound more natural.

[raven808]

Please ignore the background noise and thank you so much for the feedback everyone 🙂

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[Hazaro]

You capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.

[Tates-VO]

Hi raven I like the video game take and it sounds sarcastic which is very cool and I didn’t hear anything in the background so your all good

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